Carried Away Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Carried Away

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I am carried away by love flood
All of sudden heavy rush of blood
Veins opened up fully to facilitate the flow
I wished her to hold me to save from blow

I have lot more ground to cover
I am drawn near and over to her
She has all nerves for me with calm gesture
I see in her volcano for sure

I hold the hand with gentle power
The body is gripped with quick fever
I try to scale on top of the hill
I demonstrate it through good will

She has lot more to offer
Not against it but with lot more words to offer
I feel little set back with fear
But she reminds me coolly as dear

"Don't leave me alone" she stares
Invites me in open embrace with both the arms to dare
I take full liberty in holding her hand
As if the world has reached to an end

I reach peak with no voice
It is as if she has calm words with promise
I loose no second and float
She is under full control in boat

I go down with her in safe drive
I think it is safest way to survive
Else we could have never become one
She was destined for me to be one

I surrender to her might
She has offered no fight
All water since then has flowed down to Love Ocean
I think sky might have blessed us and witnessed the scene

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Good Barbara Cadogan3 minutes ago Spell check. I think you meant veins instead of ' vanes Comment 1 Comment0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Alastair McGough5 minutes ago don't leave her where she started, torn, lonely and broken heated Comment 0 Very emotional!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Gelene Beverly10 minutes ago I love the writing and meaning within subtle words.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

I am carried away by flood All of sudden heavy rush of blood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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