Castles Underwater Poem by Jonny Brackney

Castles Underwater



white moon reflection
shivers on
a black ocean

imagine
the castles
beneath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Fielder 22 February 2012

Jonny, I read the first few lines thinking.....la la la... this is going to be syrupy and sentimental not expecting to have to actually use my brain. What a surprise ending! 10+

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Jonny Brackney

Jonny Brackney

Louisville, Kentucky
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