For Frankie (1992 - 2007)
Snowflakes chase each other
through the sky
as she takes her
last breath
shiny black
eyes close
I stroke her fur
for the last time
they say
she was a very
old cat
This is a wonderful tribute. Your opening lines are wonderful - the contrast of the moving snowflakes to the stillness of the dying cat paints a sad picture. Lovely piece of work. S :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like this one i think i can relate to it, probably in a different way than you do! it's cute! x