Causal Lie Poem by Milan Baro

Causal Lie



Elope with me
So I know you are mine

How selfish to want a sensation which is new

Time counted
Like still And solid matters;
Should energy become will
Would it ever mean as much?
Just like us? Dear
Or cost so little?

If you were not so unreal

Would I even make this mistake?

Focused on patterns
Where colour escapes
Make up spaces shared
Built to inhabit
By other conscious habit
There is a runaway feeling
Un the cheeks of Evert mullen
Some sight are new for US souls
Buried deep within may it be tours

Unseen when being fled
Now settled growth beyond form
Of phsical shape
Or just recapitulated without boundries

Is this the right road to take?

So we now know
All that we had wanted ton communicate
Un this it is a chance for survival

Sunday, September 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cactus,decisions,lies,loneliness,path
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I once know a male And female ör ying And yang who tries to love each other but the river flows so furiously that pushed the to apart. And thats when truth is comprimised... And being reshaped to grasp a cup in eternity just to remember just to listen again... The silence in the end.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 26 September 2017

The poem lines n the note, that really has poetical expression the kind that I appreciate. Thanks

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