My support bar is collapsing,
fading away,
how will i stand,
how hard will i fall,
how will i survive,
my foundation is collapsing,
i'm crumbling to pieces
without my support,
i cannot exist,
when will I be able to relax
not being parenoyed,
about falling
about crumbling
shattering
..................
ceasing to exist.......
Format is good espically talented. Keep on writing
This is something like a small slide show, giving every step of the caving in. Good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i feel the exact same way love the poem! !