Monday, December 12, 2005

Ceiling Leaking In The Dream... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chinese guy perched on a ladder
attempted to sop up the water
with a sponge
then staunch
...
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Becky Ginn 07 May 2006

this is really good. very dreamy. It has so much thought behind it. All the best love becky

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Hugh Cobb 12 December 2005

Very dreamlike and almost surreal, Charles. Excellent piece. Sound, color, the blend of senses and their ultimate base in illusion: heady themes. Hugh

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Joseph Daly 12 December 2005

Charles, as I suggested earlier, you have moved away from the narrative and towards a more visual approach. This comfirms it. Stunning in its flow, the words are acting as colours (Something similar has appened in composed music, it was Varresse, I think who spoke of composing in colours and the contemporary American composer, Micheal Torke, also composes in colours) . Excellent work Charles

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