Celestial Sofa Poem by Adrian Flett

Celestial Sofa

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Celestial Sofa
There's mist in the gorge today
early sun nudges as it floats
wisp by wisp eases away
to join the oriole's notes
with cobbled clouds to form
a fainting, Celestial sofa.

The sacred ibis chevron
pierces the cobbled highway,
a disciplined measured throng,
over its cobbles in smooth sway.
Strong Vee shape outlined by
A fainting Celestial sofa.


The huge Vee races in unison.
There's a gentle urgency in the view
of each thrust of wing, a vision
of silent power, slicing through
the sight of cobbled sky against
a fainting Celestial sofa.

Celestial Sofa
Monday, February 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy fiction,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The beautiful graphics by Jillie Hamilton.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 February 2018

There's a gentle urgency in the view of each thrust of wing, a vision of silent power, slicing through the sight of cobbled sky against a fainting Celestial sofa. so fine an imagination... just wonderful........ thank you dear poet. tony

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Adrian Flett 05 February 2018

The beautiful graphics are by Jillie Hamilton

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