Sally Plumb Plumb

Gold Star - 9,364 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Change - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Where did you go
when I wasn't with you?
You were with her,
what did she give you?

She gave you a promise
to stay with you always.
You pledged one to me.
but have moved to the byways.

Good luck with your venture
how ever it lasts.
Your promised indenture
will soon be our past.


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Comments about Change by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • (3/21/2019 2:20:00 PM)

    Hard to know how she truly feels about what she has made a decided upon fact to put in her past. I don't read any emotions about it- good and convincing detachment. (Report)Reply

    (3/23/2019 5:00:00 AM)

    Thankyou for your commemt. Much appreciated. All my best wishes go with you. Sally

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 21, 2019

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