Cheer Up Poem by k khaing saw lwin

Cheer Up

Rating: 4.5


Walking under the bright sun
Holding an umbrella
And little sweat come out from body
Well, I think it's cheer me up.
Sometimes life seems like the sun
And we are holding our umbrella called hopes
There is no sweat but little appreciation
That's make us go through our life
So, let's make our world filled with inspiration
Carry on U, me and we :)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was walking under hot sun, it's so tiresome, then a cute thought run across my mind :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 12 November 2012

A great metaphor well penned

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C. P. Sharma 08 November 2012

It's great, who can be free from flaws but every dark cloud has a silver lining too that can make us sparkle. You say it in so sweet and musical words.

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