Last night
While ‘buying’ flowers
Red in color
Their buds opening
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Clearly this poem can mean different things to different people, and I appreciate that.
our artificial way of pleasing one's emotions...colorful outwardly...innerly void of fragrance...good write, Sadiq 10
This is such a wonderful and truly passionate display of your artistic inclination and passion for poetry. Thanks and more power, melvin
how uncanny, i was thinking of writing on the same lines. you have expressed it so well. interfering with nature, man has taken away the very essence of flowers.10++. GOES TO MY FAV. LIST
Your poem fascinates me to buy flowers tonight. Well penned. Thanks! best regards, joan d.h.
A nice work is done in a lucid manner. I liked both the form and the content of this poem. The last lines are turning and beautiful. My 10 with it.