Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Chemical Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night
While ‘buying’ flowers
Red in color
Their buds opening
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Sadiqullah Khan
COMMENTS
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A nice work is done in a lucid manner. I liked both the form and the content of this poem. The last lines are turning and beautiful. My 10 with it.

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Kay Vitter 06 September 2008

Clearly this poem can mean different things to different people, and I appreciate that.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 September 2008

our artificial way of pleasing one's emotions...colorful outwardly...innerly void of fragrance...good write, Sadiq 10

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Melvin Banggollay 02 September 2008

This is such a wonderful and truly passionate display of your artistic inclination and passion for poetry. Thanks and more power, melvin

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Mamta Agarwal 02 September 2008

how uncanny, i was thinking of writing on the same lines. you have expressed it so well. interfering with nature, man has taken away the very essence of flowers.10++. GOES TO MY FAV. LIST

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Your poem fascinates me to buy flowers tonight. Well penned. Thanks! best regards, joan d.h.

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Man on the Moon 27 August 2008

Your poem smells good

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