Child. Poem by Perfection Is Flawed

Child.

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A child's precision
a white paper world, crayon-colored.
Delicate shape, formed by
small, clumsy fingers.
Fragile
Lingeringly, carefully,
lest it should
shatter.

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Preeti - is here! 25 May 2006

a child's dream world beautifulyl expressed in such few words..yeah a child's world should not shatter! Like this poem :) Preets

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Brian Dorn 18 May 2006

Rainy Days, yes, every child's esteem and value must be carefully and delicately shaped so not to 'shatter.' Good write! ! Brian

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