Twas the night before Christmas
When I’d carry out my wish
In a relaxing hot bath
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I understand how it feels to want to end it all because I tried once. I like your poem. It has a good flow, rhyme, message and it catches and holds my attention. It is a very well written poem that comes from a deep place. It is very sad and tortured, I enjoyed reading it and I like that it is heavy with meaning. I give it a 10.
I wish u will free in this earth life before that ethereal one... Let your fears go n fly as u were a free bird_soul