Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Christmas Eve Suicide Comments

Rating: 4.5

Twas the night before Christmas
When I’d carry out my wish

In a relaxing hot bath
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Somebody Insignificant
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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2014

I wish u will free in this earth life before that ethereal one... Let your fears go n fly as u were a free bird_soul

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Caroline Bulleck 19 December 2012

I understand how it feels to want to end it all because I tried once. I like your poem. It has a good flow, rhyme, message and it catches and holds my attention. It is a very well written poem that comes from a deep place. It is very sad and tortured, I enjoyed reading it and I like that it is heavy with meaning. I give it a 10.

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2008

I tried that after the Viet Nam war - it's really a bummer

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Hiyam Alshiblawi 20 May 2008

Its sad, but it says a lot. I liked it

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