Sunday, February 4, 2007

Christmas Lights Comments

Rating: 1.5

Across the gulf of gardens
Your Christmas lights are clear.
Blinking on and off they
Bring a message of good cheer.
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Daphne Grant
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Paul Buttigieg 27 November 2007

Started very well and then lost rythm

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Ernestine Northover 06 October 2007

A sweet poem bringing Christmas ever nearer. Nice write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Brian Dorn 04 February 2007

Good write, Daphne... I particularly liked the second stanza! Brian

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