Wednesday, October 17, 2018

Christmas Wish Comments

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I want to go to the endless sleep
To lose this burden that weighs me down
Weary past exhaustion
I wish I could weep but don't have the energy
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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

Very heart-felt- - frighteningly so, my dear. Solomon below says it well. God bless you and keep you- - and keep writing- there is power in your words

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Wendy Boyce 06 November 2018

Thank you for taking the time to both read my poem and to comment.

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BHAGABAT PRASAD HOTTA 28 October 2018

WRITE MORE POEMS. YOU WILL BE A GREAT.

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BHAGABAT PRASAD HOTTA 28 October 2018

WRITE MORE BEST POEMS.YOU WILL BE A GREAT POET.

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Wendy Boyce 06 November 2018

Thank you.

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Solomon Senxer 21 October 2018

Is it not for such one that the birthday boy of Christmas came to the world? To give life, joy and hope! Great expression! Love it!

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Wendy Boyce 22 October 2018

Thank you Solomon Senxer, I truly appreciate your comment and feedback. Wendy

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Chinedu Dike 18 October 2018

A well articulated piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Wendy.

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Wendy Boyce 19 October 2018

Thank you for your kind comments Chinedu Dike. Wendy

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