Circle Of Life Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Circle Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Is it my own making
That I have got caught
In a vicious circle of
Sorrow and joy,
Or is it my past karma
That is proving the truth
I am just a toy;

How many circles I
Have to go on till my
The Soul is lost forever,
Or I have not a goal
No distance is fixed
I am just a running river;

I wish I had a fixed
Date to retire from this
Quagmire of joy and pain,
The day breaks for me
With a hidden message
How, where and when.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2018

you don't know ur past then how can u ever know ur future live today and fast only to keep safe your own tummy let all past be a glorified past don't anyone ask they are more ignorant than you at least a self sseking poet effective one are you What difference will it make to know what you were last let past be a buried past live happily on mommy earth till here you last..don't your mind to the winds cast

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 August 2018

That is a great compliment from a great poet. Thanks for taking time for reading and comment. Regards.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2018

I wish I had a fixed Date to retire from this Quagmire of joy and pain.... //.... Introspective, insightful and a philosophical presentation. At the same time it inspires the reader to have a purposeful churning of thoughts on all critical moments. Thanks, Anil ji.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 August 2018

Feeling honored with this wonderful review of my poem Sir. Regards.

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