Good Morning Poem by Anil Kumar Panda
Good Morning
I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn
I open the window and feel the cold
Through my body; it makes me shiver
As to the unfolding bud I behold
I open the door and breathe the air
Fragrance from foliages enter into me
Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair
I open the window and stoop a little
The worm has wriggled out its hole and crawled
Crushing the dews that are soft and brittle
I open the door to welcome the ray
That has come down from heaven
Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray
I open the window to watch the hill
The halo of light hovers over its head
Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still
I open the doors and windows and say
A prayer in His glory who created this all
Before I would get lost in my works for the day
a lovely appreciative poem of being alive to greet a new sunrise? .............well written
Very subtile and finest poem from a good heart,5 Stars full on TOP, Anil Sir, though time has elapsed, your poems remain and become immortal, love is immortal
Nice depiction of Aurora at dawn...last stanza is the highlight...5*****
I open the door and breathe the air Fragrance from foliages enter into me Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair I open the door to welcome the morning rays. in india you enjoy it since it is on eqator. but we who are far away suffer when cold dark, mornings greet us. thank you dear Tiku. You are blessed to enjoy all this. tony
Your beautiful poem shows the importance of taking the time to savor the wonders the Lord has wrought.
Such a lovely poem Dear Sir! Beautiful imagery, an ideal day; beautiful sceneries and starts with prays and the diurnal course. The refrain, " I open the window.., " comes out with beautiful and spelly pictures. I really loved reading the poem. It's not 'Good Morning', it's great morning.
Thanks very much my friend for your precious comment. My gratitude.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I open the doors and windows and say A prayer in His glory who created this all Before I would get lost in my works for the day.............I join you in the prayers. What a lovely poem!
I am glad for your inspiring comment Sir. Regards.