Tiku akp

Good Morning - Poem by Tiku akp

I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn

I open the window and feel the cold
Through my body; it makes me shiver
As to the unfolding bud I behold

I open the door and breathe the air
Fragrance from foliages enter into me
Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair

I open the window and stoop a little
The worm has wriggled out its hole and crawled
Crushing the dews that are soft and brittle

I open the door to welcome the ray
That has come down from heaven
Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

I open the window to watch the hill
The halo of light hovers over its head
Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still

I open the doors and windows and say
A prayer in His glory who created this all
Before I would get lost in my works for the day

Comments about Good Morning by Tiku akp

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/1/2017 10:36:00 PM)

    I open the doors and windows and say
    A prayer in His glory who created this all
    Before I would get lost in my works for the day.............I join you in the prayers. What a lovely poem!
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    Anil Kumar Panda Anil Kumar Panda (11/2/2017 2:24:00 AM)

    I am glad for your inspiring comment Sir. Regards.

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  • Tom Allport (6/25/2017 5:35:00 PM)

    a lovely appreciative poem of being alive to greet a new sunrise? .............well written (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda Anil Kumar Panda (6/30/2017 7:54:00 AM)

    Feeling honored Sir. Thanks.

  • Rajnish Manga (4/4/2017 10:57:00 AM)

    Good Morning- A marvelous piece of poetry. It goes into my favourite list. Real joy to read. Thanks.
    I open the door to welcome the ray
    That has come down from heaven
    A prayer in His glory who created this all
    (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/21/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    Thanks everyone for taking time to read this poem and giving comments. Appreciated. (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2016 4:07:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. It makes us appreciate the daybreak of each day. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Glen Kappy (9/25/2016 7:46:00 AM)

    Good Morning
    anil, in this poem you remind us that morning can refresh us. you might be interested to read my poem snail mornings which shares much of the ideas and feelings. -glen kappy (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/25/2016 8:40:00 AM)

    A sweet song that is spendid in its spirituallity! (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (4/24/2016 3:34:00 AM)

    A beautiful picture of dawn that fills the reader's heart with awe. It's the best part of the day when after darkness comes the light. (Report) Reply

  • V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy (4/21/2016 6:02:00 AM)

    Like a sage in deep penance, beautiful morning prayer, lovely (Report) Reply

  • Anzelyne Shideshe (3/31/2016 4:28:00 AM)

    I can picture myself opening the window.very captivating
    Keep the ink flowing.
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  • Rosie Bourget (12/30/2015 3:10:00 PM)

    You have an excellent writing style that inspire others to develop their own distinctive styles. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (11/29/2015 9:30:00 AM)

    What a beautiful way to greet the the morning, as if it is the first morning! Great expression and allusion.
    Thank you. I enjoyed it.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/17/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    Superb poem, very thoughtfully written. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (9/5/2015 10:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. It is all His glory. blessed is the day when we open our hearts to appreciate it in an unhurried moment. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (8/20/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    A good write.
    A good depiction of a morning
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  • Suelyn Walters (6/9/2015 6:42:00 PM)

    Brilliant I like this so much :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (5/27/2015 11:11:00 AM)

    Opening the door for the beauties of nature and singing His glory, this poem is a marvelous write.Loved every line of this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Monica Rupazo (12/17/2013 12:20:00 AM)

    I like it, good morning indeed. Wonderful poem excellent ] (Report) Reply

  • Olga Ogradyuk (12/11/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    I began to feel like I was very close to nature here, in the heart of a big city. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (10/30/2013 2:01:00 PM)

    A cheery and bright poem like a sunny morning in winter warming the hearts! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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