Thursday, August 28, 2008

City Girls Are Having Sex Comments

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In the city girls are having sex
with each other. Have they put a hex
on the men? If not, why don’t they pity
the men with whom they won’t sleep in the city?
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Michael McCall 28 August 2008

I liked this, what is more I didn't realize it was rhyming until I got about 3/4 the way through. What I mean is that it seemed effortless, didn't feel forced. Well done

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