Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Cleverness You Wish For Me To Taste Comments

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Don't try to cuddle up to me...
Enemy I've known.
Don't believe my tolerance for you...
Is a weakness I condone.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ronald Stroman 22 July 2008

those who read Lawrence S. Pertillar also read; the bible and other people like the front page of a Newspaper; to find... what's really inside.

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Susan Jarvis 22 July 2008

If such 'slither[ing] with pretentiousness' (fantastic use of snake like sibilance) 'have caused me to wisen' - how come it continues to happen? ! ? Intriguing employment of repetition - a wonderful tongue in cheek piece of poetry. S ;)

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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