Friday, May 1, 2009

Clinging Like The Scent Of Onions Comments

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Clinging to your body like the scent
of onions you have cut is love.
You cannot peel it off and shove
away its skin, for like cement,
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gershon hepner
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Jann Rau 03 July 2014

Great poem very deep and true, you have chosen well, the onion has many layers and is an excellent choice for a poem about love, so descriptive. I love your Valentine poem as well.

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Brian Jani 03 July 2014

nicely written poem gershon onions are so pungent that whole my fridge smells and tastes like onion, even the milk.

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