Polydipsic, polyuric
Terribly sweats when I’m with you
My body cells’ dying of thirst for you.
Blood rushes thru my veins and unto my brain
Heart-pounding, red flashes, pain in the head
That’s what I feel whenever you’re near.
Air inside my tummy rumbles like thunder
Farting it out makes me feel good, but
It feels more better when you just smile and care
I’m unexplanable.
I’m choked, can’t breathe
Can’t think of what to do
I’m head-to-toe bluish in love with you
Too lost in you…
I’m delusioned, addicted, and haunted by you
The wind’s whisperin’, the shadows are talkin’
Kept tellin me “You are the one”
…somebody who could simply explain the unexplanable me.
Hi I really enjoyed your poem 'Clinically explainable'. You're not afraid of going the extra mile to pour out the feelings on to paper. Thanks for posting Steve Clinically Nuts
great 1st stanza - thirsty and frequent urination...excessive enthusiasm.. nice coined words from symptoms of diabetes or atropine/belladona poisoning in the first and mostly urinating frequently due to diabetes into poetic stanza and used as a simile to so much enthusiasm of infatuation or excessive love upon seeing the apple of your eyes...thus it is clinically explained..nice concept...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thank you so much.. i'm happy you enjoyed it. =)