Clock~tower Poem by Nika McGuin

Clock~tower



Out in the middle of the forest
surrounded by thick thorn-laced branches
and bent weathered trees older than time itself
there was an antiquated clock tower
high enough to scrape the sky
inside lived a bitter and lonely old maid
holding a grudge, more than a hundred years old

Time is a fickle thing
in matters of the heart
when we've gotten over something
it suddenly seems so far away
so much longer ago than it really is
but when we're deeply hurt
time seems to stand still
we live our lives in the past
stuck in the same year and month
as the hurt which occurred
the hands of time get stuck
at the twelfth hour -
each chime, a repetition
of the painful memory

Sometimes, it's hard to get out
that's why so many people
live trapped, in their own
tailor-made clock towers
watching on as the world
continuously changes below them
meanwhile, the interior
of the clock tower is
cobwebbed, dusty, and ever-same

Clock~tower
Sunday, July 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,hurt,pain,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A cautionary tale of what can happen when you hold onto grudges.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 July 2017

The language of your second stanza is so precise in both the information it conveys and the soul-state which is so poetically evoked. This stanza alone was alone was a WOW! experience for me. Its universal truth was expressed without any self-pity or surrender to sadness; the truth of your words was a gentle reminder of our common humanity with a current if sympathy running beneath them. I am accustomed to the tone of your closing stanzas: they bring closure to these deeply emotional experiences and in the process convey your inner strength which we can borrow. Perhaps this inner strength is only a poetic quality, you may feel bewildered yourself. But that would just show how a poem can speak a truth we as individuals are still struggling with - which means the poet can learn as much from her poems as her readers can. This poem refreshed me! !

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