Close Phase Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Close Phase

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How selfless mother speaks?
From the point of greatness!
She looks at vast sky
Where birds with strong wings fly

She thinks with strong conviction
The fact is no new induction
It is customary and ritual
The children grow with time as normal

What mother thinks of children?
What she not the same person
Who wished to be their well being!
And smiled at hard work to bring

She is not forgotten in race
But compulsion has surfaced on face
Children are well educated and sent abroad
To compete with growing world

She is prepared for loss
At less cost
Children are well of and placed
Her entire period is waiting now close phase

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2015

Re: Close phase (Score: 1) by zbird on Saturday, January 17,2015 (14: 38: 15) I could feel the mothers love and courage and pride in her children and the feeling of loss as she sends them on their way to a better life... sacrifice... beautifully written from a mothers heart.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2015

Re: Close phase (Score: 1) by induce on Saturday, January 17,2015 (19: 32: 20) Jadia, Your use of phrase in among, the idea/s of differing education/s, does work the mind, thanks for sharing, keep penning, induce

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2015

Re: Close phase (Score: 1) by zbird on Saturday, January 17,2015 (14: 38: 15) I could feel the mothers love and courage and pride in her children and the feeling of loss as she sends them on their way to a better life... sacrifice... beautifully written from a mothers heart.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2015

Very touching work and quite the emotional picture painted. 12 Jan by Ray Vaudo to Close phase

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 January 2015

How selfless mother speaks? From the point of greatness!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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