Closed Poem by Elizabeth Castleberry

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Open up to me my dear
I'm here for you always
You have nothing to fear

You are not alone in the abyss
Let me help you through this maze
I can cure your loneliness

You sacrifice everything for a friend
You risk your own life
You've reached a dead end

The pressure is immense
You reach for a knife
You're at your last defense

If you're always the hero
Who's saving you?
What if all of this amounts to zero?

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Jake Gassiot 30 March 2006

for a poet that started about a week ago this is amazing you writing is way better than mine when i started and probably mine now you are talented and/or have done research on poems because when i started writing... well i sucked your poem sounds a LOT like my life great poem keep it up ill be watching for new stuff

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