Elizabeth Castleberry


I Hate Myself - Poem by Elizabeth Castleberry

I hate that you fooled me
With your infectios smile

I hate that you told me you loved me
When you were lying all the while

I hate that you were so jealous
When he was just a friend

I hate that you turned this
Into something we cannot mend

I hate that we screwed this up
Past the point of no return

I hate that you never believed me
Trust is something you should learn

I hate that you ignore me now
As if we never were

I hate that you betrayed me
For my pain there is no cure

I hate that you broke my heart
You don't know what I've been through

But most of all
I hate myself for letting you


Comments about I Hate Myself by Elizabeth Castleberry

  • (5/24/2018 5:53:00 AM)

    what an organized poem.Nice one (Report)Reply

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  • April Hammel (8/26/2008 4:12:00 PM)

    İ like rhyme and i love words.you used them soo good...Such a beautiful poem. Keep on writing :) (Report)Reply

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  • (4/5/2007 4:02:00 PM)

    WOW!
    This poem is wonderful! ...and it has very touching words!
    I LOVED IT! !
    Keep writing greater poems! !
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  • Ray Lucero (3/31/2006 5:49:00 PM)

    Elizabeth,

    That's a lot of HATE!
    To me...hate takes up way too much of my energy...conversely LOVE empowers me.
    I hope this was not the guy you danced with in your other poem.

    Ray
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  • (3/30/2006 10:21:00 PM)

    another great poem
    again one that sounds as if you knew me and you knew what i have been through
    i cant say to much more because i have a lot to do but
    keep on writing
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  • Angelique' Rockwell (3/30/2006 6:57:00 PM)

    you have to earn trust as well as learn it-also hate the prson who made you feel those things not yourself, feeling is innocence, once you lose that you might as well be dead. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 30, 2006



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