Tie Poem by Elizabeth Castleberry

Tie



I do
I don't
I do
I don't

Plucking petals from the flower
My convictions fluctuate
Always completely sure
But if you just wait

Another minutes goes by
And I'm back to fear
A heart-wrenching tie
I've shed more than one tear

From hot to cold
From yes to no
From meek to bold
From friend to foe

A choice between cursory affection
Or unrequited desires
Spiralling emotion
Tunnelling down into raging fires

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 26 July 2006

Elizabeth, funny how we're willing to randomly place our fate in the pluck of a flower petal. I like the indecisiveness... good write! Brian

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Sourav Rc 26 July 2006

A Beutifully written poem.

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