Closed Eyes Poem by Marie Bliss

Closed Eyes

Rating: 4.0


I cant think of you
I can only think of the love.
the love
the love
the gulf
the space
i made for you
the breach
the break
my heart at stake
i cant understand
i can only remember the love
the love
the love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 July 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Marie. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2016

'I cant think of you I can only think of the love' - describes a particular situation and a state of mind that is well understood by these opening lines.

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Paul Warren 16 August 2015

Nice one in your ode to love

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