Cloudburst Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

Cloudburst

Rating: 4.8


You
Kissed me
Deep in my heart.
A dark cloud burst
And it rained
As if time is lost
We were washed
And hurled away
Into an unknown ocean.


We couldn't breathe, for
We were drowning
And unconscious too.
The thunderstorm
Slowly vanished away
We were bonded together
Floating together
In wild waters.


Still, we are, and
Dear we don't want
To be rescued at all.

Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sk Nambiar 25 October 2020

The personification of nature makes the poem superb

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 September 2020

Nice concept. I wouldnt want to be rescued but to turn into a mermaid and live happily among the sharks.

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