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Lake

Rating: 5.0

Lake
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You were a big lake
Filled in the middle of the blue mountains
Forming the cascades of love
You were wild at the top of the mountain
When you started gushing freely
Down from the peaks
Forcefully you were stopped
Locked in between high dams

Blocked you on both ends and
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Friday, January 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

This is my 3rd attempt to post a comment

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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

I wish I could sue PH for every comment that flies away before being published.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 January 2021

Back again, dear Poet to give you 5 Stars for this amazing poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 January 2021

Beautiful Poem dear Poet Suresh, Wishing you a lovely 2021

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2021

Beautifully built up poem, sheer scintillating. Most important is love the soul then accepting. Fantastic poem. Thank you so much for sharing

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AFFAQ NABI 16 January 2021

Its a colorful poem! Greetings dear poet??

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Alvaro Cuesta 12 January 2021

Heartwarming poem Suresh! Wish more people were so caring.

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Alvaro Cuesta 12 January 2021

Warmhearted poem Suresh, wish more people were so caring.

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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

4th attempt to tell you this is a stunningly beautiful poem about an important concept. a thousand star poem but have to restrain myself to five star rating

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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

I fail to see value in breaking a comment in pieces to get through PH

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