Everyone competes nowadays,
Birth to death, here it exists.
Parents make it sure always,
Purchase seats for their kids.
From LKG to a profession,
Spend a lot on education,
Only to make their wards,
Compete with dear friends.
Teach to trample others,
Mercilessly, up it goes,
Even if he got 98 marks,
Complain about two, lost.
Compare them with other kids,
Lose a child's confidence,
Progress card emphasizes,
Keep the marks up always.
Every child is really unique,
He cannot be another, genuine,
Everyone truly is a genius,
In his own predestined ways.
Scores make them bloody idiots,
Overtake all, forcefully it says,
Make them useless and enemies,
Turn them to psychic violence.
Those who have fallen in this race,
In the ruthless, cruel competition,
Laments to the entire civilization,
"Don't lead us to such a culmination."
"We were all born brilliant,
We could have proved talent,
But you did never motivate,
Always asking us to imitate."
"Because of your negative attitude,
We are like this, totally neglected,
A negative attitude makes us flat,
Live with a sense of clear defeat."
"We suffer from your crazy mutilation,
You threw us into such a competitio
your poem reveals you to be a wise educator- -if only we could get the parents to listen and lighten up instead of burdening their children.... top marks
We suffer from your crazy mutilation, You threw us into such a competition It's due to shortage of resources and over population., a thoughtful poem.
It starts from the million sperms only one survives and that is how our life begins. This competition remains till we quietly reach our final resting place.... A thoughtful poem.10***
The deadly competition of modern world Is poetically painted here in this beautiful poem
Yes competition ruins. Even the best of best loses his self esteem. But a heathy competition motivates to be more better next time.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thats true. Some kids are good with hands and not their hands. They shoild also be encouraged. Some are thicker but speakers. They also must be allowed to talk. We cant all be the same