Really good! Fix next to last line (then) I like it. I like the Water poem better, it's more visual. Give me something to SEE. What's her lips look like? S.
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Really good! Fix next to last line (then) I like it. I like the Water poem better, it's more visual. Give me something to SEE. What's her lips look like? S.