The temperature peaks and valleys
Changing with the bodies in the room.
Aroma like syrup. Sweet. Sticky.
Lingering in your senses long after.
So many voices hum in my ears:
Love. Loss. Success. Failure. Hate. Fears.
Opinions litter the floor like
Empty peanut shells in a dingy bar
They easily collapse under foot
If I so choose to tread on them.
These people here, we fill this place
Completely absorbed in our corner of space.
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I would like to translate this poem
Frederick, I like this one a lot, it is a real 'slice of life'. Forgive the pun, but considering the theme I couldn't resist. There is a nice flow to the piece and I love this part: 'Opinions litter the floor like Empty peanut shells in a dingy bar They easily collapse under foot If I so choose to tread on them.'