Cold World Poem by kharon march

Cold World

Rating: 5.0


a cold cold world that does not care about anyone you are just a face an the crowd as am I just a voice that will go unheard.This world shares no concren for those who die every day the one's that share similar faits are tied together by sircumstance.There is no such thing as a happy life because every one endures strife but thats how it is a screwed up world that doesent care about its kids we will all die one day and have to atone for our sins.but i dont fear the unknown just the unexpected.the thought of not waking up one day does not fase me because I am a face no one nos my identity so its up to me to paint that picture.I will plant the seeds and evetually have to reap the benifits or the repracutions of what i do an this life

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Wow! Kharon! What a powerful and heart touching write! Deep and moving write that really shows your talent that will stay with you even after you have grown and changed your tone! ! Excellent! Keep it up! I hope you can read some of my poems and you will see that we poets go through similar experiences! We write from the bottom of our hearts and share our feelings with the whole World! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! Gracias!

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