Color Blind Poem by Nick Kler

Color Blind

Rating: 4.0


Oh stranger, my friend
I'm here
to make you understand

Ego and deception
Denies you of your color
Everything starts to look
Black and white

Wednesday, July 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 19 July 2017

Nick, this poem would be stronger if you focused on images instead of abstractions like ego, deception. Try reading some good black contemporary poets (Claudia Rankine, Terrance Hayes) . If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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