'Reality Of Ground Truth' Poem by seema gupta

'Reality Of Ground Truth'

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at the door of eye wink
sob Used to knock
Trembling lip could not speak
Hiccups are flaming embers into

Cloud of your vision
did not appear to
shower in direct
Isolated from the sharp blow
Expectations have been blown out of


Reality of ground truth
alerted making noise
and we could not meet
as bridge of destiny remain unbuilt

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Sure abhinn 09 November 2009

Reality of ground truth alerted making noise and we could not meet as bridge of destiny remain unbuilt .......both the words and the thoughts are originated from the best of a true heart. well written

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 26 September 2009

beautiful poem with great ending...well said

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