Coming Home, Lake Vera Poem by Craig Steiger

Coming Home, Lake Vera



After days down freeways
I come home to frosty woodsides
Where a night of snow
Has graced every surface,
I can breathe again gazing at clouds-
I feel the fast life of salaries & carshine
Interrogating this hidden quiet way
But I too sift like fresh snow
Through the aimless shank & swirl
To trace the tiny ledges of the unlatched gate

Wednesday, January 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: aimless,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Mcwilliams 02 March 2008

Nice, Craig, particularly the keen observation of the restorative nature of home. Evokes a sense of peace that is palpable. Don

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 January 2008

wow, craig. this is a great poem. you are very observant and the best is that you can turn that into a great asset. this poem shows that potential. keep up the great work. i write both good and some lousy poems. i hope you find the best ones of mine. see you and a prosperous new year to u.

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