'Comments 0n Existence' Poem by Romella Kitchens

Romella Kitchens

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

'Comments 0n Existence'



Commentaries On Existence
' Love is the only way for us in life.'
- Gajanan Mishra

1.
It has been a weary Winter. Remember that.
Keep yourself warm. But, care for the state of
others, as well...

Put another human being first sometimes.
Then, you will have done what is true destiny.

2.
Listen, I promise. Spring will come, not just in season
but as evolvement. Then, go to Upper Pennsylvania
and watch the fish near the Ohio Pyle. Or, fish in the inner
waters of the diviness of your soul and think about
mankind, the shoes he needs to fill.

The fish know. They love each other. They school together.

3.
We create peace. It is fulfilled creation. But, first we
must understand the waters of life. We must look past
ourselves into the universe.

4.
Go to the rushing forces of existence, understand
and see it can if loving be no other way.


Note: Mr. Gajanan Mishra is a respected submitter to
PoetryHunter. A comment he made concerning my poem
'Shore' was a catalyst for the poem above. Thus, much
thanks, to him and other poets.

Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poet was reviewing comments on other poems and re-reading the comment by Mr. Mishra inspired a poem. Life is amazing in this respect.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 19 March 2014

Amen! That is music for my soul!

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Romella Kitchens

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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