Cheyenne Ashley
Pennsylvania sadly
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Commit Suicide..To God

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Commit suicide to God
Every single day
Tell Him all your pain
And He'll take it all away
Commit suicide to God
Give Him all your heart
Pray for all your needs
And you'll never grow apart
Commit suicide to God
Tell Him you give up
Fell His love overtake you
And let Him lift you up
Commit suicide to God
Every single day
Give it all to Him
And He'll take it all away
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COMMENTS
Tony Kelly 22 November 2008
This is an excellent poem... but right now at this moment he still haven't responded and I can't take much more
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Ben Gieske 08 April 2008
God has given us life and loves us just as we are, S/he wants us to be as human as we can be. Real love, I think, in our human condition here involves pain, but not all pain is the same. I just hope that your pain, which you most vividly describe in your poems, is the good kind - pain which will help you grow and live a fuller life - a life for another. Some poets I have read say that they find salvation in writing their poetry. I hope this is true of you. Keep on writing. You are able to express what you feel.
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