Commitment Poem by Jay P Narain

Commitment



Love me, love me,
I am so full of passion,
Let us embrace and fulfill our lust,
This is the goal of my ultimate love.

Not so fast, she replies with a smile,
Waiting for a good thing is a virtue not denied,
When you hold me in your arms, do you love me by heart? ,
Pleasures only last for few moments, but true love always last forever.

How can I show you That I love you so much,
Hugs and kisses makes me feel so close,
Even after making love. when I forget to show any affection,
Still I think I love you from the bottom of my heart.

Let us be intimate with platonic love, she whishpers,
Let us build the bondage of love,
Call me whenever you need me,
Miss me wholeheartedly when I am not around,
Show me by words or action that you love me,
Plant the seeds of commitment in each other,
And watch the love blossom all over in our hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 16 June 2009

It is a bit like Tantric Yoga The sharing of the body Helps in the bonding of souls When the physical needs Are satiated the comfort Which flows transcends The body and reaches the soul Platonic love may be a way, That distance will increase And keep love may sometimes Prove to be a fallacy! The woman like a garden Should welcome and accept Her man like a river of life Into her heart, her soul Destinies fulfilled By recieving she gives And by giving he recieves Lust alone can never bind Two hearts into one Which is the committed Outcome of true Love! Angel

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Joseph Poewhit 10 June 2009

Like looking for the perfect wave.

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