Wednesday, July 8, 2015

Commitment? Comments

Rating: 4.5

You loved with all your heart,
I loved with all my brain.
You thought forever and always,
I thought if the gods allow.
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Kylie Greenham
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Chinedu Dike 18 July 2015

One does not love with the brain, the abode of love is in the inner recesses of the heart, as the divine function of the heart is to love. Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. I like the articulation and insight of the poem. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2015

The heart is important, but the brain must stay in command Thanks for sharing, Kylie Peace

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 08 July 2015

when opposing perspectives are not quickly and wisely ratified, it breeds misunderstanding and ultimately, lack of commitment. You presented your idea so beautifully. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'The Empress Of My Heart'

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