Commitment Poem by Hardik Vaidya

Commitment

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Your eyes committed.
Your hair, the sun shine on them committed.
The gentle movement of your bosom as you breathed,
Committed.
Your lips, they didn't move, in utter silence,
In the blush of youth, committed.
Your navel, hiding behind your Saree, a star on your waist,
Committed.
Committed to a confession.
A confession you never made.
Your tounge was tied.
You therefore never lied.
When will you come to me a sinner,
So that we can sin together?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I don't tell stories, I murmur dreams.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hardik Vaidya 08 February 2013

Thank you Dave walker, you made my life.

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Dave Walker 07 February 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Hardik Vaidya

Hardik Vaidya

Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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