'Complete Eden! ' Poem by Shania K. Younce

'Complete Eden! '

Rating: 2.5


A tear drop came last.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
Eden dropped a tear.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
Eden drops a tear.

Eden dropped a tear.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

Eden drops a tear.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear drops from Eden.
Eden dropped a tear.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear drops from Eden.
Eden drops a tear.

Eden dropped a tear.
A last tear drops from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

Eden drops a tear.
A last tear drops from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

Thursday, July 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: religion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I did this in my fourth period English class. Please comment at will and with honesty!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 13 July 2014

I agree with Ed Nigma this is a different style of writing. but clever. I like it after I caught on to it.

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