'A Living Day'

A living day.
A living way.
A living life.
A living time.
A living breath.
A living living.
A living leaving.
A living seeing.
A living left.
A living talk.
A living cough.
A living speech.
A living speak.
A living lively.
A living love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was trying to use a living many times as possible. But, I stopped short because I felt that it might convey how people live life. In constant fluid motions. Unknowing of all things. Passing each day by. Please comment at will and with honesty.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2014

well tried but you missed now a days people they are living dead

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Antonio Liao 16 April 2014

i felt then that i am alive, a wish come true...God bless a star and 10/10

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Ken E Hall 08 December 2014

A living day expressed as we all go by our daily chores with a bonus of love at the end, , , enjoyed...must say as life goes on wisdom follows close on our heels...regards

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Kemurl Fofanah 20 September 2014

a living words.... u seem good at being precise... good work

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Yash Shinde 29 April 2014

a lively poem! ............ ........cute and short..........

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Lively poem, Thumbs up 10/10

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 17 April 2014

and a Lively Poem! Lol nice write

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