Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 453 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Well' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

Take a drink from a well. Find it cold. Drink it's splendor. Drink it's light. Make it bright. Tastes it's grip hold tihgt. It's sweet cool running sound. It's fish flounder. Ponder, ponder it's mind. Thoughts burn alive. It is quite here. It's tranquility fine. Remember water gentle and flowing. It's fresh calm forever kind.


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Just thought of this. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about 'Well' by Shania K. Younce

  • (5/21/2015 4:53:00 AM)

    Unique writing Shania... Forever fine of you to share... God bless you.. (Report)Reply

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  • Tajudeen Shah (11/1/2014 12:16:00 AM)

    the 'well' water, the imagined effect of drinking and feeling it, and its supporting thoughts all have its bizarre thought features. i think that itself makes one engage in another reading, and land on another interpretation, at least for me, it is so. well.. the 'well' might well add wellness to those wallowing in the valley of lethargy, if attention submitted to its devotion. let me read again, to see any fish is left in the cool mysterious profoundness of the 'well'. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/14/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    nice imagery
    i like your way to describe it
    well written
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  • (6/17/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    I like it, It is focused well, honestly. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    I like it, It is focused well, honestly. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2013 11:43:00 PM)

    I like it, It is focused well, honestly. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 18, 2013


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