Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,496 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Concern For My Love - Poem by Amitava Sur

A drop of tear, but representative of pain
should never drip from you, o' my dear, again
And that's my prayer and I'll endeavor
With my utmost for you time and again.
Ami tava (30.8.2015)


Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Concern For My Love by Amitava Sur

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/6/2015 2:15:00 AM)

    Drop of tear is pain and drop of tear is love. So nicely envisioned. A brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/1/2015 2:02:00 AM)

    Yes, tears do represent pain, the pain of losing your love. Beautiful, short sweet and tender, like love! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/31/2015 9:23:00 PM)

    a drop of tear - is it love? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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