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all those English words
in a giant concrete pour
profane statues birthed

M.J. Lemon

Monday, May 1, 2023

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Richard Wlodarski 11 May 2023

When you reverse your poem: birthed profane statues / pour all that concrete / in those English. I think that I've been listening to Strawberry Fields Forever for far too long! Awesome haiku, my friend!

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M.J. Lemon 12 May 2023

Thank you so much, Richard...and as I now reread, I notice the connection, too.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 May 2023

2) 'words' went on sabbatical. They were meant to be placed after English in my comments. I don't wanna get in the same trouble as Don Cherry. Still think that was a hackett job done on him. And he's never recovered.

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D.N. Rebb 02 May 2023

One of the best haikus I have ever read. (a SOLID poem)

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M.J. Lemon 02 May 2023

Thank you so very much, D.N.!

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