gul naz

Rookie (18th march,1983 / kohat)

Confession - Poem by gul naz

I picked up a quill
And a parchment too
To write a letter
Aletter of confession
I thought
I needed
A dictionary too
To find the words
Best to confess
I chose the words
And arranged them too
But something was lacking
Or everything I mean
The words seemed totally askew
Empty, void and soulless too
Quill and parchment would not do
To ask forgiveness a tear is enough
But the tear should come out
From heart true

Comments about Confession by gul naz

  • Sadiqullah Khan (2/3/2010 6:00:00 AM)

    Very true, rekhtia, kha poem de. language and style.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/20/2009 9:01:00 PM)

    To ask forgiveness a tear is enough
    But the tear should come out
    ..............................................Adab Gul
    From heart true.real confession from heartis enough for removal of guilt from mind and Allah too accepts it...but never cry as it willbringshame on you...beautiful poem. i loved it most....10

    read mine cry not...placedcalled home...reality
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/12/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    very well presented i say! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 29, 2009

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