Confused Poem by BlacknessRose ...
Confused
Kiss me, kill me
Hug me, push me away
Do you want me to go
Or do you want me to stay
I'm confused by your actions
You're intentions unclear
You're just so contridicting
Do you even want me here?
Stop talking in riddles
Just tell me your thoughts
You're making my mind hurt
Trying to understand
Make it easy on me
Please just say
If you want me to go
Or if you want me to stay
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
5/5/2024 11:26:15 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Most people would be very confused in a situation like this. This is a very heartfelt and soulful piece, written from the depths of your heart and soul. There are several spelling and grammar errors, and maybe you would want to correct those. The way this is written is good, but the corrections need to be done so the reader can have a smooth poem, instead of the jerky one here. If I may I would like to edit this for you, and show you what I mean. Let me know. Love & hugs, Barbara