BlacknessRose ...

Rookie (Nov.30 1991)

Crimson Liquid - Poem by BlacknessRose ...

Crimson liquid
Flowing down
Crimson liquid
All around

Shining glint
Of the blade
Shining glint
Human made

Emotionless eyes
Fully dead
Emotionless eyes
Color of lead

Bloody moon
Darkest night
Bloody moon
No shining light

Silent footsteps
No apparent sound
Silent footsteps
Body found

Pool of blood
On the floor
Pool of blood
Frozen core

Tears of sorrow
Feeling pain
Tears of sorrow
Salty rain

Dulled feelings
Full of hate
Dulled feelings
Lover’s sake

Shattered mirror
Scattered around
Shattered mirror
Image drowned

No more beating
Of the heart
No more beating
Important part

Room untouched
Nothing out of place
Room untouched
Suicide case

Hint of anger
Slightly flaring
Hint of anger
No one caring

Unclear thoughts
Sour bitterness
Unclear thoughts
Jumbled mess

Crushing weight
Of her death
Crushing weight
Nothing left

Silver gun
Loaded bullets
Silver gun
Hurtful threats

One loud noise
Fired gun
One loud noise
Business done

One soft thump
Body to the floor
One soft thump
Behind a closed door

Crimson liquid
Flowing down
Crimson liquid
All around


Comments about Crimson Liquid by BlacknessRose ...

  • (5/3/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    not bad! awesome! u know, it takes talent to write stuff so gothic. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    This poem is so beautifully written. You have such an amazing talent. However... it scares me. I know you may say that it isn't about you, after all you are still alive... but if you're writing about it, you must have had thoughts of sucide at one time. I just want to say keep writing and see if you can channel better thoughts. God bless!
    ~Lacey~
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  • (5/11/2008 3:57:00 PM)

    it's dropp dead beautiful...
    i love it...
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  • (2/18/2008 7:55:00 AM)

    Love It! Dead Awesome! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 14, 2008



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