Confusion Poem by ObiGod Chidi CC

Confusion

Rating: 4.5


CONFUSION
Like a wide eyes looking but not seeing,
Sent on a mission with no commission;
The mind thinking but not perceiving,
Adding immobilization to motivation,
Juxtaposing prophecies of one future.
One double mind in a different direction,
Yet waits in expectation for it to feature;
Alas! Succeed towards no destination.

Standing and stranded, around but lost.
Wise words go with foolish actions;
It looks like a battle of love and lust.
Feeble feet are idle with strong passion,
Equipped with knowledge not specified;
Perplexed like fertile barren women;
With determinations that can't decide
As hope emerges from a vague omen.

The naive unexpectedly ends in a cell,
Playing in a magnificent haunted castle.
Fleeing through the abysmal dark tunnel;
Confronted by friendly foe you can't battle.
Influx of false advises from wise voices,
Inspiring the unrewarded genius to retire.
Destiny is choosing from identical choices.
Hope is the fuel the brave apply to refire.

When shall two vagabond hearts meet?
To be distracted from the attraction to fail,
Rioting souls flows like a hopeless fleet
Till in psyche war, confusion is maimed as a tail.
When experience and expertise crumble,
Hold that clear vision that conquers confusion.
When peace fell to pieces, tumble and rumble,
Surely dreams and reality will join in fusion.

OBIGOD CHIDI C.

Sunday, September 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,futuristic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 September 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of mind. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Obigod Chidi Cece 14 September 2017

Thanks Jazib. I will do so.

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