Confusion Poem by Dane Dino

Confusion

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I would watch you pass through the hall
And be like ole' what have I missed
Its been so long since I've kissed
I want to love her
But shes already taken
Now thats shes free
I dont know what should be
Should I try to chase her
Or leave her there to die
I love her so much
But its to hard to try
Do you love me back
Or should I just back track
Give me one chance
And I know I wont let you down
Please just let me love you
And I'm sure you will love me as well
Even though you look so pale
It reminds me of a fairy tale
You are so beautiful to me
But we will never be

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Coreena Dejesus 16 July 2007

I can feel your confusion in this poem, great show of emotion! Hugz~ CC

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Anabel just Anabel 10 July 2007

nice. my friend you are passing through the same situation as I am. it's so hard and painful to see the person you love with someone else and even thou you feel happy for the person for they have found love, yourself feel miserable at knowing is not you who is there with her/him. nice poem! ! !

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